Draw this again- Something is missing

My little entry for the "draw this again" contest! c:

I don't know about you, but there should be some improvement there, hehe. I remember I was so proud of the older version when I finished it. It had like, meaning and stuff.. and colours! I even recorded it, and made a speedpaint video! [link] gosh I loved it, but after I switched accounts and two years passed I saw so many mistakes, so here I am drawing it again! This time (just for fun) I actually also recorded it... or so I thought... something is wrong with the file so it's gone. but I really wanted to show you how I drew it this time! but oh well...

enjoy my crappy past art~

The new one:


The old version is on my old account ~Creambox


art © *Lavnic